Needs ALOT of work
Ok, voices were clear and pretty good!
Thats it.
Animation style and mouths were ok, need polishing but you already knew that.
Its pretty obvious that you have no idea what loathing in NY is going to entail but hopefully you're working on that. lol. Lastly add a pet or some kind of goofy character to carry the story along would be a much needed addition too. I see a glimmer of potenital here but it seems unlikely that you can make this great. Good luck!